Worldbuilding Contest *Closed*

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WE GOT FOUR ENTRIES! :squee: That means we qualify for the first place prize. Winner will be announced in two weeks. Go here to read the entries.



EDIT: Added link to a dA formatting guide! Ctrl+F "new" or skip directly down to the guidelines. 



UPDATED JUNE 24: New deadline is July 31st!

It's simple. Write a story about three pre-selected characters travelling in your original world. Let them explore. Let yourself explore your world through their eyes. After the characters of your novel leave a scene, does it still exist without them? Of course it does. Now's the time to show it.

Quick Links
:bulletblack: Rules
:bulletblack: How to Enter and Submit
:bulletblack: Criteria for Entries
:bulletblack: Deadline
:bulletblack: Prizes
:bulletblack: Premise and Characters
:bulletblack: Logistics
:bulletblack: Guidelines
:bulletblack: Summary of Events


Rules
1. Submissions must be at least 3000 words. No max word count, but please don't make me regret that. Chances are the characters aren't going to be able to explore the entire world, so try to keep it cohesive. It should not be broken into multiple chapters, but multiple entries are allowed. However, you'll have to come up with a reason why they've returned to that specific world.

2. All genres are welcome, but obviously the contest is geared toward speculative fiction.

3. All ratings are welcome with proper warnings and filters within dA's guidelines.

4. Because I'm the only judge, entries must be in English. Spelling and grammar count (see criteria).

5. Submissions may be uploaded to deviantart, livejournal, or fictionpress. However, you must credit me for the characters and link back to this contest wherever you have uploaded it.

6. Cannot use previously created work. Cannot use universes not created by you. However, you can create a world specifically for this challenge if you wanted.

7. And obviously no plagiarism or blatantly ripping off another world. For clarification, if you read Harry Potter and decided to create a world around a school for magic, that's inspiration. If you read Harry Potter and decided to create a school for magic where there are there are four houses that compete for points and students are separated on the whim of a talking hat, that's blatantly ripping off another world. 
-If you think another contestant has violated this rule, send me a note with proof. They will be disqualified automatically and I will help with reporting them. Attacking that contestant without contacting me and/or without proof will only result in your own disqualification. 

How to Enter

:bulletgreen: Favorite this journal to state your intent. Anyone can enter. You do not have to ask to enter. If you ask, I'm going to assume you haven't read this and say no. 

How to Submit

:bulletgreen: Comment on this journal with a link to your story by the deadline. No link, no entry. If you upload at 11:59 and comment at 12:01, it doesn't count. :saddummy:
:bulletgreen: The comment can include a short blurb (under 50 words) about the world they're entering to entice anyone reading the comments to click, but it's not necessary.



Criteria for Entries
:bulletblue: The story (was it interesting and engaging?): 30%
:bulletblue: The characters (how accurately are they portrayed? -the characters were created specifically for this challenge. I do not have any preconceived notions about how the characters should be beyond what is written down): 30%
:bulletblue: The world (does it stick to its own internal logic? Is it unique and creative?): 30%
:bulletblue: Grammar and spelling (there are dictionaries, spellcheck, and people out there who offer beta services, so don't try to make me feel bad for wanting to read something intelligible): 10%



Deadline
June 30, 2013, 11:59 EST (if 10% request an extension, then the new deadline will be July 15, 2013, 11:59 EST)
Deadline is now July 31st. I won't be able to read the entries until after that, so that means more time for writing!
However, if I receive 50 submissions, I'm just going to close it for obvious reasons. (It probably won't get to that, but just in case)



Prizes
:bulletred: Satisfaction? /shot

:bulletred: 1st place (must have at least four individual deviants submit an entry)
150 :points: 
Feature of winning story and any pieces involving this world the winner chooses 
Two (2) colored full-body sketches
A oneshot (2000-5000w) OR a fully-colored chibi OR a fully-colored half-body normal style

:bulletred: 2nd place (must have at least eight individual deviants submit an entry)
75 :points: OR 50 :points: and a ficlet (under 500w) 
Feature of winning story and any two pieces involving this world
A colored headshot OR a colored full-body sketch OR two uncolored full-body sketches

:bulletred: 3rd place (must have at least twelve individual deviants submit an entry)
25 :points:
Feature of winning story and one other piece involving this world
A full-body sketch

:bulletred: Honorable Mentions
Not sure if I will have these, but if I do, they will receive a colored sketch headshot and feature of winning story.

:bulletred: Point prizes may increase. Prize donations are welcome. Donators can also participate.
:bulletred: If there are 10 or fewer participants, all participants will receive a sketch headshot. If there are more than 10 participants random.org will choose the ten who will receive a sketch headshot. 
:bulletred: Anyone who wins anything from me (points, art, etc.) will receive a note, so it's not necessary to watch me for contest updates (unless you want to).




Premise
Niselise, Olix, and Arc travel to multiple worlds in pursuit of knowledge, money, and friendship.

Characters
Olix, Arc, and Niselise by imaginary-rose (pixel image created by Kutori)

The Archivist, nicknamed Arc: An ethereal being, he exists between worlds without a world designation. He's socially awkward, but has a strong desire for companionship. Before he found the other two, he had existed with another being. One day, it disappeared and he took to travelling cross-dimensionally in search of his friend. Eventually, his loneliness got to him and he took on a corporal form so that he could interact with people. He can't stay in a corporal world for an extended period of time without resorting back to his ethereal form, so he began just visiting worlds and recording information about them. If a world discovers the multiverse, he'll visit and see how it works out, but if the multiverse "forces" itself on an unprepared world he'll remedy the intrusion. 

He closed a rip in a world after a trans-dimensional creature tore through it, only to discover an injured Olix after the fact. He took him to a multi-dimensional house to recover and Olix decided to stay. Later, a hole is ripped in another world and he quickly patches it up. Unfortunately, he hadn't realize it was a (wo)manmade hole, which would be considered the world's first foray into discovering the multiverse. He tries to extract himself, except Niselise invites herself along. During this time, Arc had continued to search for his friend, but Niselise insists they all get to explore the multiverse. For the most part, Arc lets the others walk all over him without complaint. However, he will take a stand if he believes they will have a significant impact on a world's history or if he believes he has found a clue to his friend's whereabouts.

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Olix, pronounced Ollie: comes from the world designated: IR3-2-11, a world thought to be comprised primarily of ocean. Olix was formerly the pirate captain of the Sea Demon. After a particularly daring attack, Olix took his ship farther than any other vessel had gone to escape the authorities. While in the middle of the ocean, his ship was attacked by a trans-dimensional creature. He fell through the portal behind the creature after seeing the rest of his crew perish. Arc rescued him and offered to take him back to his homeworld. However, after the death of his crew he couldn't bear to return to it. He feels intense guilt about his crew, but he is regaining his upbeat personality. It helps that he's established a new crew. 

While Arc might have brought the three of them together, Olix keeps them together. He can be a bit overprotective. If he feels like one of the others is in danger, he's likely to break in guns blazing and ask questions never. He was against the idea of exploring the multiverse, especially if there's no real reward, but he would hardly let Arc and Niselise travel by themselves. Neither has the sense to stay out of trouble. Olix is also very charismatic and charming; capable of talking himself out many situations. He's mostly straight, but he's willing to try anything and anyone at least once. ;P

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Niselise, pronounced like niece-Elise: comes from the world designated: IR3-2-12, a high tech world that must upgrade its citizens to keep them relevant in a world with rapid technological advances. Niselise has gone through life un-upgraded without detriment. She suspects there was some genetic tampering, but never met her parents and has no desire to. She's smart, often too smart for her own good. She's been known to throw caution to the wind in the pursuit of knowledge, developing a blind spot for danger if there's a chance to learn something. She might find herself in the role of damsel in distress, but she's bright and inventive and could create an instrument of escape Macgyver-style in a pinch. 

Niselise is very aware of her own genius and appreciates anyone who marvels at it with her. Rules of society mean very little to her. They're necessary to control the drones of society, not her. Niselise joined the group last, after she discovered the multi-verse by accidentally blowing a hole in her own universe. Arc patched it up to prevent overflow, but she decided to stay with the group. It was her idea to explore and catalogue the multiverse. After all the adventures they've been on together, Niselise finds herself occasionally struck with bouts of sentimentality toward the guys. She tries to keep the useless emotions to herself, but it's obvious she cares for them.


Logistics
:bulletpurple: Arc's ethereal form is basically a ball of red light. Arc's corporal form can be injured, but he can't be killed. He can take on any form, but the pictured form is his favorite.
:bulletpurple: Arc is the only one who can open portals.
:bulletpurple: Arc can understand all languages. 
:bulletpurple: Niselise created a device that can translate any language after some exposure to it.
:bulletpurple: Residing in a multi-dimensional house has adapted Niselise and Olix to most air quality. 


Guidelines
1. It's a story, not a travelogue. The characters should be interacting with the environment not passively observing it. Be creative. Make it interesting.

2. All three characters should be present in the world. They should all enter and leave the world. What happens to them in between is up to you.

3. This is an exploration of your world. Not your novel. Characters from your novel should not have a significant role in the story. Cameo appearances are not forbidden, but chances are I haven't read your novel before and it'll just look like an extraneous detail. There can be exceptions, of course, if your characters are a part of the setting, but it has to make sense. 

4. Stories should stand alone. Prior knowledge should not be necessary to understand your story. It begins with the characters' arrival and ends with them leaving. Don't leave them stranded! Don't permanently kill or maim them!

5. NEWfav.me/d3n24uj. Make sure you know what a badly formatted story looks like and don't do it

You can create your own classification number if you want. Classification can be created by two letters from your username with a 'verse number designation (IR4 is the fourth 'verse) - story number within the 'verse (2 means second story in the 'verse) - last two digits of the year the verse was created (11 means it was created in 2011).


Everything in a Nutshell
Deadline: 11:59 EST, June 30, 2013 11:59 EST, July 31st, 2013
Medium: Prose only, at least 3000 words.
Genre: Any
Content/Rating: Any in keeping with dA's policies
Language: English
Submitting: Comment here with a link to your entry. Unlimited amount of entries. 
Judging: By me on the story, the characters, the world, and basic mechanics.

Questions?
© 2013 - 2024 imaginary-rose
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Raqonteur's avatar
Oooookay.
Finally finished it :P

It's a little longer than planned 11,187 words (17 pages) :P
In fact I had to submit it in two parts as the file was too big :P

Part 1 raqonteur.deviantart.com/art/A…
Part 2 raqonteur.deviantart.com/art/A…

I hope it's not too late for the contest.
And i hope you enjoy my little (LOL) tale.